the morrow

This essay has an interesting topic. What you need, JustMe, is specificity and examples, and I know from my own knowledge of this issue that there are plenty out there. ...

The truth of reality, in all realness, is that there is no reality. Sure, sometimes we might think we know what's going on, but, in actuality, we haven't the slightest ...

Ooh! My church raises money for the heifer project every year! I would definetly be interested, but I don't have a credit card or anything, so I don't know if ...

That's a really good idea. I don't understand how it would work, though - would the contest serve to raise awareness of the charity, or would it serve to raise ...

I like this--not only is it creative, but it is purposeful, and I like that purpose. However, I think you should write out "13-18 MILLION" as "13,000,000-18,000,000" instead, as it ...

I don't mean to assert my opinion, though its rather pellucid in my post. I certainly don't want this to be a locked article like the abortion essay! XxxDo, I ...

A fine essay for an agreeable audience. But for a hostile audience of omnivores, this essay would be debunked as another attempt to assert an "ethic" that has no social ...

Hey fellow writers, As of late it occurred to me that we number fairly high now, not merely we of the YWS, but young writers in general. I've also noted ...

I enjoyed this. It has depth and insight, and looks beyond the issue of ethics into the much more complex and relevant (and frequently neglected) area of social and legal ...

Perhaps it is spelt different in the US, but in England 'fetus' (as you spelt it) is spelt 'foetus'. Sorry, just thought I would mention that, but, as I said, ...

This essay overlooks one integral aspect to the Abortion debate; what constitutes life. You may wish to explore it more. You also need to get your contention out sooner, and ...

We share similar frustrations, JustMe. Are you thinking of majoring in journalism?

A great piece of writing. I don't think I could have pulled off this level of description. One of my few qualm is the first analogy--"like a spoonful of lava." ...

Maybe Azila meant that it just doesn't seem to have a significant theme. Like Prokaryote said, it's enjoyable, but in a rather pointless way.

Good writing, but it seems like a lot of summary is shoveled into too small an area. Spread the background information around a bit.